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vivianlove



Joined: 16 Feb 2010
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 18, 2010 11:20 pm    Post subject: Goodbye :( Reply with quote




Silent and feeling ill,
I went to ur coffin
where u layed so still,
not knowing wat to say or do...
I tried to say something only meant for u,
A trace of dought left mi mind,
wen i thought i saw ur skin shin.
No smile layed apon ur face,
suddenly mi heart began to race.
I asked daddy y no smile occured,
But his hurtful breathing is all i heard.
Whisper,Whisper
Sneak, Sneak
Now these tears roll down my cheek.
All the pain I try to hind.
But if u look closly,
You can see it in my eyes.
Y did u hav to leave us here.
There are still so many things that I fear.
So many things I will miss.
U always chose the cheek 4 a kiss.
Sad Crying or Very sad

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bonafidepoet



Joined: 23 Nov 2003
Posts: 322

PostPosted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 12:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

even though our love ones
move on in the after life does
not mean they left us, they will
always remain with us in our hearts,
spirit, and soul;
and for those fears always remember
fear is false, evidence, appearing, real

peace, thanks for sharing this piece

peace
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